D8 Skills #89 & D10 | Recording Mix Breakdown

As I said here, I want to make more 'how to' videos.
Yesterday, I wrote the script for a video where I'll break down the mix from the band's performance in BPC Live Lounge.
This afternoon, I recorded and edited the video:
Regularly creating this sort of content will showcase my personality and skills to potential clients, and promote my services.
A made a video like this before, however, it's horrific. I feel like my skills have improved drastically in this area.
Things that are dreadful in the Last Video and aren't in this one:
- I didn't write a script, meaning it was all over the place
- Too long and *the opposite of compact*
- I was too close to the microphone
- Not engaging enough